John, I probably agree with about half of the things you say... but I have to use the word "probably" because I just don't know. Your vanities are incredibly long.
Only a professional writer, and too few at that, can keep a person's interest for that long.

Brevity is your friend.

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The Lord is my light and my salvation; whom shall I fear? The Lord is the strength of my life; of whom shall I be afraid? - Psalm 27:1